Looks pretty good for a third flash project! Still seems like you're experimenting with the program and are still figuring out the ropes animation itself. I'm not sure if this will make it through the portal, but don't be discouraged, it's only your third film, as you stated in the title. If you take a look at very basic tween animation from animators like legendary frog, I'm sure that you could find ideas and techniques to be able to make full fledged shorts instead of simple loops. Good luck!